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copper eyes and the way his fingers tangled my hair was a revelation.

he has hands that know me, hands that understand every pale particle of my skin. they touch me, by molecules, down to the core. when he holds me i can feel his fingers on my collarbone, just resting, just quiet like they have found a place to belong.

he has eyes that gleam like a cheaper shade of gold. he has eyes and they know my soul.

if i trust him. i would
run into the horizon and dive into sunlight like a dream. if i could. if i could stop my breath for one moment, just one moment, and stare into the sky, forget my paperthin personality.



chocolate hair and the way his jaw clenches is an ache in my bones.

he has a smile that promises the world, lips peeling back from straight teeth. it warms me, in molecules, the chemicals spreading in a chain of reactions right down to my soul.

if i trust him. i would
elope into the midnight, stumbling over branches and snapping twigs. if i could. if i could stop my tears for one day, just one day, and disappear into the darkness, run into the wind.



copper eyes and the shape of his back as he walks away breaks my eyes.

if i believe. i would
take the chance and dive into the sky, fumbling over the edges of clouds. if i believe. if i could stop myself from thinking for one moment, just one moment, and let myself tumble into the echo of dreams, hold on to the wishes of the world.

if i believed.

belief is a beautiful thing,
easy to think and difficult to find.


comments welcome. :heart:
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:iconjoufancyhuh:
joufancyhuh Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You've been featured here: [link] !
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offbyzero Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2009
he has hands that know me
That was rather perfectly said.
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:icononeofthose-rachels:
oneofthose-rachels Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2009
thank you very much.
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seabats Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2009
aww, this is lovely <33
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oneofthose-rachels Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2009
aww, you're lovely (:
thank you :heart:
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13IzABelle13 Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2009
i do believe i have ran out of words to compliment this. just a second, im gonna try and search for some.
brilliant  
–adjective 1. shining brightly; sparkling; glittering; lustrous.
2. distinguished; illustrious.
3. having or showing great intelligence, talent, quality.
4. strong and clear in tone; vivid; bright
5. splendid or magnificent


tht good?
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oneofthose-rachels Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2009
oh my gosh.

wow.
thank you so very incredibly much.
right now, i've run out of words.

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13IzABelle13 Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2009
*Glees*
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:iconplatinummyr:
platinummyr Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
:heart: Trust is a very difficult thing to secure, and even more so to hold onto.
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:icononeofthose-rachels:
oneofthose-rachels Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2009
i agree completely.
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:iconplatinummyr:
platinummyr Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
<3
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BizarrePrincess Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2009
Is your total lack of capital letters a fashion statement? What about random punctuation, is that an artistic choice?

Because no, it doesn't really look like it makes sense. But it's a pretty patchwork of cheesy attention-grabbing words. The kind they will be printing in chocolate boxes soon.
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oneofthose-rachels Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2009
I'll definitely look out for those chocolate boxes then (:

can't tell you how much I value constructive feedback from people who write creatively.
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iheldyoucloser Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2009
"copper eyes and the shape of his back as he walks away breaks my eyes."

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oneofthose-rachels Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2009
:heart:
thank you.
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allison712 Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You've been featured! :teamwork: [link]
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oneofthose-rachels Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2009
thank you [:
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smilewithlove Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
love it
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oneofthose-rachels Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2009
aww, thanks! :hug:
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smilewithlove Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
you're welcome
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shadowlight166 Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2009
Oh, I love this so much. It is so beautiful
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oneofthose-rachels Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2009
thank you so much! <3
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HamletCell Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2009
so very, very beautiful. :heart:
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oneofthose-rachels Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2009
thank you very much <33
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staplingmutilation Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
that is sen-f**in-sational.

i could read that over and over again,
in so many different little ways, with a new little revelation each and everytime.

Im not sure u have relised how deep this actually goes on the levels of people invading your everything. But so not in a bad way almost.
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oneofthose-rachels Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2009
oh wow.
thanks so much! :heart:
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zLustre Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2009   Writer
i think that having faith, and believing is the most beautiful thing in the world- next to true love and little things like a sunlight's embrace. :D

and oh, this is lovely.
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oneofthose-rachels Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2009
belief is definitely beautiful. <3
thank you so much (:
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zLustre Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2009   Writer
absolutely. :heart:
you're welcome. :heart:
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coldfalafel Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
beautiful. i rly like how you structured it :D
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:icononeofthose-rachels:
oneofthose-rachels Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2009
thank you! <3
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coldfalafel Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
your welcome :)
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xcaroline Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2009
wow, i can't find the words for this :heart:
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oneofthose-rachels Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2009
haha, thanks..? (:

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xcaroline Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2009
why the question mark? ;P
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trapped-inside-xx Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2009
stunning, really. as always. :love:
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oneofthose-rachels Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2009
oh, thankyousomuch! :hug:
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notsovulnerable Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2009
This is wonderful.

copper eyes and the shape of his back as he walks away breaks my eyes.



That ^ is most wonderful of all. :bug:
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oneofthose-rachels Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2009
aw, thanks a million! <345567
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zoeil Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2009   Photographer
you are amazing :heart:
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oneofthose-rachels Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2009
you are amazing.
and thank you, very much. <3
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zoeil Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2009   Photographer
you're very welcome <3
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